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The Secret Behind David Ogilvy’s Brilliant Headline Copywriting

“On the average, five times as many people read the headline as read the body copy. When you have written your headline, you have spent eighty cents out of your dollar.”
~ David Ogilvy

David Ogilvy is one of the greatest ad men ever. His contributions to the marketing industry are incalculable. And anyone in advertising couldn’t imagine a world without his iconic ads.

In his day, marketing budgets were spread amongst the traditional marketing outlets; magazines, newspapers and commercials, for example. But as we have transitioned into the digital age, what could we possibly learn from this classical ad man? Turns out, a lot.

Appealing to Your Audience


The above ad contains what is arguably considered the most famous headline of all time. But why is this? To answer that, we must think critically about the underlying message here and what Ogilvy is attempting to convey to readers.

“I don’t know the rules of grammar. If you’re trying to persuade people to do something, or buy something, it seems to me you should use their language.”
~ David Ogilvy

Imagine this scenario: It’s 1958, Americans have been living in a prosperous post-war era for years, and the automobile is the ultimate rolling status symbol. The folks at Rolls-Royce approach Ogilvy for promotion.

What could David possibly do to persuade buyers towards a Rolls-Royce versus the slew of other luxury options? In essence, a luxury car is just a luxury car, right? They all claim to be quick, comfortable and classy.

Ogilvy recognized the similarities between all the luxury automobile offerings and searched for a remarkable trait. A benefit that spoke to the audience. But what benefit would the upper-elite crave the most? The ad man knew an escape from the impoverished world is something the upper-class notoriously desire. Or in other words, they longed for peace and quiet. So by simply pulling a quote from the Technical Editor’s write-up in The Motor, he had his headline:

“At 60 miles an hour the loudest noise in this new Rolls-Royce comes from the electric clock.”

Eureka! He had struck advertising gold. And the rich and famous finally had an option to escape the average, everyday lower-class world while driving from mansion to beach-home.

Lesson: His headline spoke the language of the intended audience.

The Modern Day Challenge


You may be thinking, what does this have to do with Internet marketing? Well actually, everything. From landing page design to blog posts, the headline is vital. But first, we have to rethink the headline.

In web marketing, the modern day headline isn’t simply the start of your ad copy. But rather, it’s the link that must demand a click in Google’s SERP’s, the only thing a Twitter user reads next to a shortened URL, the bold headline font of a landing page, the clickable link in a Facebook share, the list goes on and on.

With the endless other distractions on the Internet, how can you attract their attention for longer than a split-second?

Thus, the challenge for modern day copywriting comes in when attempting to capture an audience’s attention while speaking to them in engaging yet understandable language.

The question I pose to you:

How can you craft a headline that speaks to your intended audience while staying relevant in all of these different modern day mediums?

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  • http://allday.cc Alastaire Allday

    Great post, Bradley — thanks!

    I think you’re right. Too many people (including clients) think the purpose of websites is merely to offer information, rather than sell (by providing a benefit to the reader).

    I think Ogilvy’s rules for creating a good print ad still apply to good web copy. In fact, I’m experimenting with Ogilvy-style techniques on my own copywriting site. The beauty of the web is we have more metrics than fact-loving Ogilvy could have ever dreamed of!

    Ogilvy’s print rule was: big picture, 10 word headline, 240 words of copy. I think that works per-page on a website. Too many websites seem cluttered to me and I think the message gets diminished — too many bright, shiny buttons for customers to click!

    Whether for web or print, I agree with Ogilvy — a good headline is one that provides news or information to the reader. More people click on my blog posts when they’re entitled “how to…” than anything else.

  • http://www.bradleygauthier.com Bradley Gauthier

    yup, it’s all about engagement! Thanks for the comment!

  • http://knitfreedom.com Liat

    Your blog post helped make the headline challenge very approachable, by giving such a memorable example. I will think of this Rolls-Royce headline every time I do a headline, or tweet, etc.

    Thank you!

  • http://www.bradleygauthier.com Bradley Gauthier

    at first it seems the simplest thing, but good headline writing is tough… however it is possible. Good luck!

  • http://dannybrown.me Danny Brown

    Always been a huge fan of Ogilvy. Like you say, his formula was pretty simple – “Speak like your customers.”

    Funny how so many miss this basic tenet. Oh well… ;-)

  • http://www.bradleygauthier.com Bradley Gauthier

    yup, it’s always interesting seeing copy that clearly doesn’t speak the customer’s language, thanks for the comment Danny!

  • http://twitter.com/bmccrain brendan mccrain

    Nice to see another Oglivy fan. Of course, most of the older marketers know all about him but I find that many of our contemporaries are more interested in the latest social media how-to (some of them are great). “Oglivy on Advertising” has been a bible for me.

  • http://www.bradleygauthier.com Bradley Gauthier

    nice! I read “Ogilvy on Advertising” years back and is one of the main reasons why I decided to venture out of the corporate world and start my marketing company. Glad to see you like the book too!

  • http://twitter.com/ShallieBey Shallie Bey

    Thank you for a great post on the value of headline copywriting. I am increasingly learning on Twitter that far more people read the headline than click the link. It took some time to discover this. So, I now try to convey the message in the headline AND encourage people to click the link. I think I would be much further along if I had the benefit of this post earlier.

    Shallie Bey
    Smarter Small Business Blog

  • http://www.bradleygauthier.com Bradley Gauthier

    glad to hear! personally, I enjoy playing around with different headlines for the same link to see what works. It’s always interesting finding what combinations make people click

    Thanks for the comment Shallie!

  • Digiteyes

    “Confessions of an Advertising Man” provided me with a needed education in objectivity for advertisement. Regardless of how lovely or heart-pulling an ad is — does it bring in the sales? David Ogilvy’s work on direct mail ad campaigns and testing, testing, testing are directly applicable to email campaigns and usability practices today.

  • http://www.bradleygauthier.com Bradley Gauthier

    I love that book!

    Thanks for the comment :)